Index: hig-ch-layout.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/web-devel-2/content/projects/gup/hig/hig-ch-layout.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.43
diff -p -u -r1.43 hig-ch-layout.xml
--- hig-ch-layout.xml	26 Jul 2004 20:40:49 -0000	1.43
+++ hig-ch-layout.xml	29 Jul 2004 15:32:58 -0000
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ Message Dialogs should be 600 by 200.<re
 	  <tbody>
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>Large Icons (file browser)</entry>
-	      <entry>Horizontally centered with and (6 pixels, if specification necessary)below large icon</entry>
+	      <entry>Horizontally centered and (6 pixels, if specification necessary) below large icons</entry>
 	      <entry align="center">
 		<mediaobject>
 		  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/large_icon_label.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject>
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ Message Dialogs should be 600 by 200.<re
 	    
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>Small icons (toolbar)</entry>
-	      <entry>Vertically centered with and (6 pixels, if specification necessary) to the right of small icons</entry>
+	      <entry>Vertically centered and (6 pixels, if specification necessary) to the right of small icons</entry>
 	      <entry align="center">
 		<mediaobject>
 		  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/small_icon_label.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject>
@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ Message Dialogs should be 600 by 200.<re
 	    
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>List control label</entry>
-	      <entry>6 pixels above and horizontally left aligned with list control or 12 pixels to the left of and horizontally top aligned with list control</entry>
+	      <entry>6 pixels above and horizontally left aligned with the list control, or 12 pixels to the left of and horizontally top aligned with the list control</entry>
 	      <entry align="center">
 		<mediaobject>
 		  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/list_control_label.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject>
@@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ Message Dialogs should be 600 by 200.<re
 
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>Radio button and check box labels</entry>
-	      <entry>6 pixels to the right of and vertically center aligned with radio button</entry>
+	      <entry>6 pixels to the right of and vertically center aligned with the radio button</entry>
 	      <entry align="center">
 		<mediaobject>
 		  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/radio_button_label.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject>
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ Message Dialogs should be 600 by 200.<re
 
 	    <row> 
 	      <entry>Textfield labels</entry>
-	      <entry>6 pixels to the left of and vertically center aligned with textfield control</entry>
+	      <entry>6 pixels to the left of and vertically center aligned with the textfield control</entry>
 	      <entry align="center">
 		<mediaobject>
 		  <imageobject><imagedata fileref="images/textbox_label.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject>
Index: hig-ch-principles.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/gnome/web-devel-2/content/projects/gup/hig/hig-ch-principles.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -p -u -r1.13 hig-ch-principles.xml
--- hig-ch-principles.xml	9 Dec 2003 11:09:57 -0000	1.13
+++ hig-ch-principles.xml	29 Jul 2004 15:32:59 -0000
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
     <sect1 id="principles-forgiveness">
       <title>Forgive the User</title>
 
-      <para>We all make mistakes.  Whether we're exploring and learning how to use the system, or we're experts who just hit the wrong key, we are only human.  Your application should therefore allow users to quickly undo the results of their actions.</para>
+      <para>We all make mistakes.  Whether we are exploring and learning how to use the system, or we are experts who just hit the wrong key, we are only human.  Your application should therefore allow users to quickly undo the results of their actions.</para>
 
       <para>If an action is very dangerous, and there is no way to undo the result, warn the user and ask for confirmation.  Only do this in extreme cases, though; if frequently faced with such confirmation messages, users begin to ignore them, making them worse than useless.</para>